Reason, rhyming, seeking, not finding
Sitting, waiting, with a heart of minding
Going this way and taking that turn
If only I knew the way to go
Immobile, unmoving, timid, it's binding
The puddle surrounding is ever reminding
Stepping backwards? Your approval to earn
If only I knew the way to go
Waiting and waiting, again with the waiting
Impatient, enduring, turned apathy sedating
Once more forward with more than concern
If only I knew the way to go
Up in the air with significant debating
Your opinion, the only sound and just rating
Unless you take my hand, it's hard to discern
If only you'd tell me the way to go
~ndc 10/08
smooch
3 comments:
Wow, Nicky. This really makes my Mitch song seem so cheesy.
Really, Nicky. This is good.
Love you.
Jodi
Wow! Did you write this yourself? This IS good! Can you get this published?
Thanks, guys. I would really like to write children's books. It's the publishing and illustrating that I would have problems with.
smooch
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